I liked the song, especially the 90s ish feel to it.
Im not sure how to improve the end, but it just didnt jive with me for some reason.
Sorry for the vagueness of that critique, all together a great song.
Ty for the hints i made the end ya know... a classic breakdown. I like it but thats what you guys are for!
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